This will contain the complete first draft of Lesson Plan, all sitting in one easy to access page.
Chapter 1
This is where it all started and is the one that needs the most rewrites and works. Chapter 1 began when i wasn't even sure this was going to be a full book. I just wanted to put out some more Ageplay content that was marketed towards middles like myself instead of littles. That meant no diapers, no spankings, etc. However, so much happens in this first chapter that it honestly feels like it's own story sometimes and drastically needs to be edited and cleaned up.
Chapter 2
As you'll see in Chapter 3, this was intended to be part of it, but i realized it was all much bigger than any of the other Chapters were. This was also back when I was treating each Caption as one day in Sam's life at the school, which didn't really work as the series progressed and more stuff happened in each day. This Chapter will likely be shifted to focus more on Sam's relationship with Mistress Foster and their growing friendship to better make the actual finale mean so much more.
Chapter 3
So originally Chapters 2 and 3 were part of 1 single super-chapter, but i realized that none of the other Chapters were going to be as long as this, so i broke it up into two separate ones. This is why Chapter 2 feels so pointless. This chapter is also the one that gave me the most anxiety as I had to draw upon so much of my own inner Dysphoria for Sam's character.
Chapter 4
This Chapter, unlike 2, was the most aimless. I knew i needed this chapter to end with them realizing they wanted to become a student, but it was so confusing. part of the early drafts involved Sam spending a lot more time in class, but that seemed very boring, and didn't fit with the closing timeline of classes beginning in a week. I dunno, I might shift and edit things around to fit better.
Chapter 5
This one was probably the hardest and went through soooo many rewrites. Originally I had planned on traveling all the way back home and confronting their parents and childhood home, but they're parents didn't feel like real people at this point and completely changing the setting at the final act felt wrong, and I had already used Jessica to represent their life before all this, so this felt like the perfect way to resolve everything. I did leave one last plot point which i was sad i didn't get to include, which involved Mistress Foster's backstory and why it's important she ends up being Sam's new mother, but I'm definitely going to try and find a way to insert it into the final draft.
Epilogue
Originally this was going to be longer as I had plans for this to be an even 40 or 42 Captions long, but i wasn't sure how to write it out in a way that had a satisfying conclusion and didn't just feel like the end of another chapter, so i kept it to a concise single Caption end.
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